Your SaaS website sounds like an engineer wrote it (because one probably did)
Your CEO can explain your product in 30 seconds on a sales call. But your website takes 3 minutes of scrolling and visitors still don't understand what you do. Why?
Your CEO can explain your product in 30 seconds on a sales call. But your website takes 3 minutes of scrolling and visitors still don't understand what you do.
The problem? You're speaking engineer when your buyers are listening in customer.
This isn't about "dumbing down" your product or website. It's about translating technical capabilities into business outcomes.
Here's how to fix it without losing your technical credibility.
The pattern we see constantly:
Real example from our work:
Why this kills conversions:
Layer 1: The Business Outcome (What changes)
Not what your product does but what the customer can do/achieve/avoid by using your product. Clear measurable business impact will always win over very technical explaination of your product
Frame: "You'll be able to..." not "Our platform provides..."
Layer 2: The Value Prop (Why it matters)
The pain point this solves for business AND Cost of NOT solving it. Tell users if they can save time, earn more money, be more cost effective, reducing risk or reduce operational complexity.
Frame: "Instead of..." or "Without needing to..."
Layer 3: The Technical Proof (How it's possible)
NOW you can mention the technical capability. But only as evidence of the outcome. Keep it brief, link to technical docs for depth but never over explain it.
Frame: "Powered by..." or "Built on..."
The Formula: [Outcome] + [Why it matters] + [Technical credibility]
NOT: [Technical feature] + [How it works] + [More features]
For data-heavy products (like wealth management software):
For AI/ML products:
For integration/platform plays:
For complex workflows:
"But our buyers ARE technical"
Even technical buyers make decisions based on outcomes first. They evaluate technical specs AFTER deciding if it solves their problem.
Most times, you don't need to sell your product to the tech team but to the leadership team who then need to approve budgets, check compliance or see how it intergrates with current stack.
Two-path approach:
Example structure:
The audit questions to ask:
Quick wins (no redesign needed):
When to call in help: If you've tried this and it still feels like you're translating Greek to Greek, you probably need a copywriter who specialises in technical products. Not a generalist. Someone who can interview your technical team AND your customers.
Before you publish any page, read it to someone outside your industry. If they can't repeat back what you do, your copy isn't ready.
The best SaaS websites sound like they were written by your best salesperson, not your CTO. Technical accuracy matters - but only after you've earned the right to explain it.
Next step: Run your homepage through this framework. If more than 50% of your copy is features/technical specs rather than outcomes, you've found your conversion problem.